Research and Planning Feedback

A very high-level response from you Libby.  In order to improve your response - keep your journey to completion  documented throughout this current stage of the process.  Feel free to evidence screen shots of your project and comment on choices in editing being made and provide evidence of post-production timelines,  You could revisit some of your research posts and include screen grabs of key shots from openings you have analysed in order to guide your reader through your responses further.  A fantastic effort thus far - well done!